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Andrea πŸŒ„'s avatar

Really in depth journey! ❀️time felt disjointed a little like a candy flip 😊

Lani Nieu's avatar

The first person to mention the candy flip πŸ˜… πŸ˜…

Thanks for noticing! 🫧

Andrea πŸŒ„'s avatar

Haha, I think it's not an experience a lot of people partake in haha. It's one of those iykyk things.

VeryTiredWoman's avatar

I remember having that realization that other parents were kinder than my own. It still hurts to this day.

Lani Nieu's avatar

I'm sorry kind stranger... I hope your wounds heal soon 🌸 🀍

Just remember, their actions were never your consequences. You are so much stronger than you know ✨

Gary L Taylor's avatar

I really enjoyed reading that. Takes you to a number of places, it creates and brings images to life in your mind as you read.

Lani Nieu's avatar

Thank you so much, I'm so glad to hear the images formed for you... I was worried it might be too haphazard~

Claire Noireβ™‘'s avatar

This took me on a real journey. Solid stuff

Lani Nieu's avatar

Oh wow, the kindest words <3

#NavonaRises

Keiichiro Iwamoto's avatar

I felt the love, the running, the breaking, and the coming home.

Lani Nieu's avatar

THank you so much, Keiichiro (also what a cool name!)

It really was a fast-forward lovestory…

Wendy Cockcroft's avatar

This is an interesting approach in storytelling.

Amber Estwick's avatar

I loved every minute

Amber Estwick's avatar

Omg, omg this is beautiful

Lani Nieu's avatar

Thank you my Bubble 🫧 🀍

Amber Estwick's avatar

I read this story back again today . You're welcome 🫧🫧

HVR's avatar

Holy shit. Your time jumps are executed flawlessly.